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Facets of the Soul This anthology is a very personal and poetic account of a troubled adolescents journey from the shelter of family and school into the realities of making a living and making a life. This transition is difficult because he is alienated from a father he admires, and has lost a beloved grandfather. The poet is a loner after the style of Shakespeares Hamlet. His Rosencrantzs and Guildensterns betray him, and the Ophelias in his life cannot cope with his concept of reality. He contemplates to be or not to be with a traditional bare bodkin but eventually chooses a less painful method for his attempt to commit suicide. Fortunately he has used his poetry as a form of sublimation for the problems he is facing and he survives this experience. The reader, however, is left with the suspicion that the writer is perhaps enjoying masochistic pleasure from his experiences... But then, perhaps we were all poseurs at this young man's stage of development? The poet has a good vocabulary and uses it well. He can also turn a
good phrase: He intuitively suits his poetry to his mood: When his thoughts are turbulent he uses a free verse form and punctuation is absent. This is an excellent use of his media as it creates a sense of confusion, which is a mirror of his mind at that time. When he finds some resolution to a problem aa and bb rhyme schemes, seven beats to a line and relevant standard punctuation appears. This provides a suitably soothing and positive effect. Dylan Thomas came to my mind after reading The Father's Sins. That must be a plus to my mind, as I consider Thomas's farewell salute to his own father a poetic masterpiece. He should consider revising his page and verse formatting. I find blank pages distracting, and I appreciate symmetry of poetic presentation to my senses. This is a personal evaluation (I admire the metaphysical poets) but I think it is worth consideration as an addition to the writers poetic flow. These poems are only some facets of the artists soul; work is still in progress in the making of a poet to be remembered. I recommend this anthology to all of us, especially poets and other writers, who remember their own involved past, and are curious about the future of this budding poet, caught up with the declaration of his negative emotions. Gloomwing Review by Vangerry M. Oldham Pages: 48 |
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